微软的新软件‘视窗10’

我以前没用汉语说我对软件有什么感觉（我以前没有用汉语描述过我对软件的看法），因此这篇文章很难写。我会给你们英文版看一下，这会帮助你帮助我（对你我都有帮助）！

今天我安装了Windows 10。这个软件是由微软免费提供的。说真的，这个版本没有打动我。比起以前的版本，除了布局之外，这个版本没有很大的区别。我知道Windows 10上有一些新的功能，如：Microsoft Edge，可是我觉得这个功能仅仅是一个花招，生活中派不上用场。是啊，新设计又雅致又现代，但是我觉得也是有点繁忙（复杂？）的，开始画面上有太多不必要的东西 ，比如说（例如），只要你能找到互联网按钮就够了，所有的浏览器都有去你最喜欢的网站的捷径，我们真的不需要开始画面上的跳单子（跳出对话框）（jump lists）！

可能我用windows 10的时间不够长。谁知道呢，可能我用过了它一会儿，才会开始喜欢（可能过段时间后我就会适应， 谁知道呢）。

Very Nice！ 

逻辑清晰，语序准确，如果想更加提高的话，建议要减少口语化的表达，例如：“谁知道呢”

微软的新软件‘视窗10’

我以前没用汉语说我对软件的有什么感觉，因此这篇文章很难写。我会给你们英文版看一下，这会利于你帮到我帮助你帮助我！

今天我安装了Windows 10。这个软件是由微软免费提供的。说真的，这个版本没有打动我。比起以前的版本，除了布局之外，这个版本没有很大的区别。我知道Windows 10上有一些新的功能，如：Microsoft Edge，可是我觉得这个功能仅仅是一个花哨花招，生活中派不上用场。是啊，新设计又雅致又现代，但是我觉得也是有点繁杂繁忙的，开始画面上有太多不必要的东西 ，比如说，只要你能找到互联网按钮就够了，所有的浏览器都有去你最喜欢的网站的捷径，我们真的不需要开始画面上的跳出对话框单子（jump lists）！

可能我用windows 10的时间不够长。谁知道呢，可能我用过了它一会儿，才会开始喜欢。

I have never used Chinese to talk about how I feel about software before, so this was really hard to write. I will give you the English version to look at, this will help you to help me!

Today I installed Windows 10. The software was provided free by Microsoft and to be honest, I am really not that impressed by it. Compared to the previous version, apart from the layout, there really isn't that much difference. I know windows 10 has some new functions, for example Microsoft Edge, but I think this is merely a gimmick, it has no real use in life. Yes, the new design is very sleek and modern, but I also think it is a little bit busy, there are to many unnecessary things on the start menu. For example, as long as you can find the button for the internet, this is enough, all web browsers have shortcuts to your favourite websites, we really don't need those jump lists on the start menu!

Maybe I haven't used it for long enough. Who knows, maybe after using it a while, I will start to like it.

very nice job！

微软的新软件‘视窗10’

我以前没用汉语说过我对软件的看法(讨论过我对软件的看法)，因此这篇文章很难写。我会给你们英文版看一下(看一下英文版)，这会对你帮助我有作用！

今天我安装了Windows 10。这个软件是由微软免费提供的。说真的(说实话)，这个版本没有打动我。比起以前的版本，除了布局之外，这个版本没有很大的区别(改变)。我知道Windows 10上有一些新的功能，如：Microsoft Edge，可是我觉得这个功能仅仅是一个花招(噱头)，生活中派不上用场。是啊，新设计既雅致又现代，但是我觉得有点令人眼花缭乱，开始菜单上有太多不必要的东西 ，比如说(例如)，只要你能找到互联网按钮就够了，所有的浏览器都有去你最喜欢的网站的捷径(快捷方式、按钮、超链接)，我们真的不需要开始菜单上的跳转列表（jump lists）！

可能我用windows 10的时间不够长。谁知道呢，可能我用过了它一会儿，才会开始喜欢。 (也许使用过一段时间，我就会开始喜欢它。)

BTW：

They are all grammatically correct.

The sentences or phrases are what I may use.

微软的新软件‘视窗10’

我以前没用汉语说我对软件有什么感觉，因此这篇文章很难写。我会给你们英文版看一下，这会帮助你帮助我！

今天我安装了Windows 10。这个软件是由微软免费提供的。说真的，这个版本没有打动我。比起以前的版本，除了布局之外，这个版本没有很大的区别。我知道Windows 10上有一些新的功能，如：Microsoft Edge，可是我觉得这个功能仅仅是一个花招，生活中派不上用场。是啊，新设计又雅致又现代，但是我同时觉得    有点繁锁  ，开始画面上有太多不必要的东西 ，比如说，只要你能找到互联网按钮就够了，所有的浏览器都有去你最喜欢的网站的捷径，我们真的不需要开始画面上的跳单子（jump lists）！

可能我用windows 10的时间不够长。谁知道呢，可能我用过了它一会儿，才会开始喜欢。

I have never used Chinese to talk about how I feel about software before, so this was really hard to write. I will give you the English version to look at, this will help you to help me!

Today I installed Windows 10. The software was provided free by Microsoft and to be honest, I am really not that impressed by it. Compared to the previous version, apart from the layout, there really isn't that much difference. I know windows 10 has some new functions, for example Microsoft Edge, but I think this is merely a gimmick, it has no real use in life. Yes, the new design is very sleek and modern, but I also think it is a little bit busy, there are to many unnecessary things on the start menu. For example, as long as you can find the button for the internet, this is enough, all web browsers have shortcuts to your favourite websites, we really don't need those jump lists on the start menu!

Maybe I haven't used it for long enough. Who knows, maybe after using it a while, I will start to like it.

一点儿补充/另一种表达

微软的新软件‘视窗10’

我以前没用汉语说过我对这个软件有什么感觉的想法，因此这篇文章很难写。我会给你们英文版看一下，这会帮助方便你帮助我！ 

今天我安装了Windows 10。这个软件是由微软免费提供的。说真的，这个版本没有打动我。比起以前的版本，除了布局之外，这个版本其他没有很大的区别。我知道Windows 10上有一些新的功能，如：Microsoft Edge，可是我觉得这个功能仅仅是一个花招很鸡肋，生活中派不上用场。是啊，新设计又雅致又现代，但是我觉得也是有点太繁忙琐的了，开始画面上有太多不必要的东西 ，。比如说，只要你能找到互联网按钮就够了，所有的浏览器都有去你最喜欢的网站的捷径，我们真的不需要开始画面上的跳单子快捷链接（jump lists）！

可能我用windows 10的时间还不够长。谁知道呢，可能等我用过了它一会儿阵子后，才会开始喜欢上它。

I have never used Chinese to talk about how I feel about software before, so this was really hard to write. I will give you the English version to look at, this will help you to help me!

Today I installed Windows 10. The software was provided free by Microsoft and to be honest, I am really not that impressed by it. Compared to the previous version, apart from the layout, there really isn't that much difference. I know windows 10 has some new functions, for example Microsoft Edge, but I think this is merely a gimmick, it has no real use in life. Yes, the new design is very sleek and modern, but I also think it is a little bit busy, there are to many unnecessary things on the start menu. For example, as long as you can find the button for the internet, this is enough, all web browsers have shortcuts to your favourite websites, we really don't need those jump lists on the start menu!

Maybe I haven't used it for long enough. Who knows, maybe after using it a while, I will start to like it.

逻辑清晰，用词准确，写的很接近native speaker了。 学汉语多久了？