Can you please help proofread and correct an introduction. thanks very much.

Hi all, my name is Shawn, and I've joined xxx family for several months. It's really a great pleasure meeting so many friends here, hearing your stories and talking with you freely. My primary reason for joining the Corner is something about work. I am now in a foreign company where my boss is expecting us possess good English. it's really a shame to have found that, after communicating several times with my foreign colleagues, there is still much space for improvement in both basic English listening and speaking. The second thing keeps me studying, taking part in the English Corner is about you. I've learnt a lot from you, like hearing your stories of your lives, your ways with business and people, even the customs and taboos of other contries, thus English becameinteresting to me. Regarding English studying, I believe that the best way to study is to try, and make mistakes.so thank you if you ever pointed my mistakes and corrected my sentences.

There's also another Corner teaching and helping others learning Cantonese. I think I should take more time to attend such activities. I'm not sure, because I'm from ShaoGuan and Cantonese is not my native language, that my Cantonese is good enough to help others, but i would always try to do so. I believe that, "giving is receiving.", you can learn something when you help others learn things. So if there's anything I can do for the Corner, just let me know.

Months ago, Molli asked me to write an introduction and i wrote it tonight. Thanks Molli and Sea, you never push me.

Can you please help proofread and correct an introduction. thanks very much.

Hi all, my name is Shawn, and I've joined xxx family for several months. It's really a great pleasure meeting so many friends here, hearing your stories and talking with you freely. My primary reason to join the Corner is something about work, because I am now in a foreign company and my boss is expecting us possess a well English. it's really a shame to find, after several times communicating with my foreign colleagues, that there is still much improvement space for both English listening and speaking of basic words. The second thing keeps me studying, taking part in the English Corner is about you. I've learnt a lot from you, like hearing your stories of your lives, your ways with business and people, even the customs and taboos of other contries, thus English became interesting to me. Regarding English learning, I believe that the best way to study is to try and make mistakes. so Thanks so much if you ever pointed out my mistakes and corrected my sentences.

There's also another Corner teaching and helping others learning Cantonese. I think I should take more time to attend such activities. I'm not sure, because I'm not native Cantonese and it is not my tongue language, that if my Cantonese is good enough to help others, but i would always try to do so. Moreover, "giving is receiving", it's a way to learn new things while you try helping others. So if there's anything I can do for the Corner, just let me know. My pleasure for sure..

Months ago, Molli asked me to write an introduction and i wrote it tonight. Thanks Molli and Sea, you never push me.