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My homework about the famous devorce of Hollywood! Jannifer Aniston and Brad Pitt were the one of the most beatiful couples in the Hollywood.In 2005 the couple fallen out. The large amount of money was paid for their devorce. because Pitt and Aniston applyed to the private judge to sign the documents related with a devorce. That's admitted by the lows of the state California. According to this documents the married couple participated in their money. The primary reasons of the devorce still are unknown. Despite it the mass media spread the news about the paramount couses of the breakdown. The thirst said that Jannifer couldn't have a child. But the majority of people maimtained the transpoarent reason of the couple's devorce. They thought Pitt and Aniston split up because of Angelina Jolie. Bread Pitt chated up with the famous actress during the making a film "Mister and Missis Smith". So Pitt got to know his a new wife. Now Bread and Jeniffer keep in touch that makes Angelina feel furious.

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My homework about the famous devorce of Hollywood!

Jennifer Aniston and Brad Pitt were the one of the most beatiful couples in the Hollywood.   In 2005 the couple fell out. A large amount of money was paid for their divorce. because Pitt and Aniston applied to a private judge to sign the documents related to a divorce. That's allowed by the laws of the state California.

According to this documents the married couple agreed on the division of their money in a settlement.

The reasons for the divorce still are unknown.  The mass media specualated in the the news about the  causes of the breakdown. Some puiblications said that it was because Jennifer couldn't have a child. but most of the media writers maimtained that   reason for  the couple's devorce was the relationship between Pitt and Anglina Joilie. They thought Pitt and Aniston split up because of Angelina Jolie..  Brad Pitt is supposed to have became involved with the famous actress during the making a film "Mister and Missus Smith". So Pitt got to know his a new wife.     Brad and Jeniffer still keep in touch and that makes Angelina fee unhappy..
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My homework about the famous devorce of Hollywood!

Jannifer Aniston and Brad Pitt were the one of the most beatiful couples in the Hollywood.In 2005 the couple fell fallen apartout. The large amount of money was paid for their devorce. because Pitt and Aniston applyed to the private judge to sign the documents related with the a devorce. That's admitted by the laows of the state of California. According to theseis documents the married couple participated in their money (this bit does not quite make sense - did they share the money?).
The primary reasons of the devorce still are still unknown. Despite it the mass media spread the news about the paramount coauses of the breakdown. The thirst said that Jannifer couldn't have a child. But the majority of people maimntained the transpoarent reason of the couple's devorce. They thought Pitt and Aniston split up because of Angelina Jolie. Bread Pitt cheated up with the famous actress during the making a film "Mister and Missis Smith". So Pitt got to know his a new wife. Now Bread and Jeniffer keep in touch that makes Angelina feel furious.

Notes:
"this" is used for 1 item
"these" - for many items.
chat = to talk
cheat = to deceive/betray

If it is a homework I'd also suggest running a spell-check function in Word.



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My homework about the famouse devorce of Hollywood!

Jannifer Aniston and Brad Pitt were the one of the most beatiful couples in the Hollywood.In 2005 the couple fallen out. The large amount of money was paid for their devorce. because Pitt and Aniston applyed to the private judge to sign the documents related with a devorce. That's admitted by the lows of the state California. According to this documents the married couple participated in their money.
The primary reasons of the devorce still are unknown. Despite it the mass media spread the news about the paramount couses of the breakdown. The thirst said that Jannifer couldn't have a child. But the majority of people maimtained the transparent reason of the couple's devorce. They thought Pitt and Aniston split up because of Angelina Jolie. Bread Pitt chated up with the famous actress during the making a film "Mister and Missis Smith". So Pitt got to know his a new wife. Now Bread and Jeniffer keep in touch that makes Angelina feel furious.

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