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The zoo
I hung out with my friend June yesterday. At first we'd like to go shopping but June said that the zoo had some new animals and flowers. I hadn't been there for ages and really curious about what kind of animals they have. So we went to the zoo.
I remember the first time I came to this zoo I was 6 or 7. I was very young at that time and quite excited about visiting the zoo. In my memories, the zoo was extremely large. I almost couldn't reach the end. But things changed since I have grown up, this time I felt it's not a big zoo at all. I even wondered if this zoo was the same one I had visited before.
The zoo has many kinds of animals. There are some rare ones like alpaca, lesser panda, seal, giraffe, raccoon, llama and some more common animals like tiger, lion, wolf, monkey, and crane.
I liked llamas most. They were just so adorable! There were only two there and I guess one was a boy and the other was a girl. They were not like other animals standing far away from people but walked up close and looked at me. Very gentle eyes, just like water waving when they blinked. They moved close and would like to eat everything! June's umbrella almost became their food.
The tongue of the giraffes was soft, strong and flexable. It looked like they were eating when they were drinking. I really had no idea why they needed to be that strenuous to drink. After they drank some water leaked from their mouth.
The poorest animal was the wolf. They'd like to drink but the basin was empty. They can do nothing but to walk around the cage again and again. June said to me, "Won't they feel even thirster then before? Walking will cost them energy and water too." Maybe the wolf didn't like humans. They couldn't speak and couldn't make people understand them. So they have to walk around to make people notice them. But it was no use. No zoo keepers came.
I start to feel sorry about the animals. If they were living in their hometown, at least they could drink and walk and jump and go wherever they'd like to be. But now, they were in a cage. No freedom, even not enough water. On the other hand, if there is no zoo in the world, we couldn't have a chance to stand so close to the rare animals. We will have no chance to observe them. It's really a very complex and hard thing to tell whether zoos are right or wrong.
The zoo
I hung out with my friend June yesterday. At first we'd like we wanted to go shopping but June said that the zoo had some new animals and flowers. I hadn't been there for in ages and was really curious about what kind of animals they have had. So we went to the zoo.
I remember the first time I came went to this zoo. I was 6 or 7. I was very young at that time, and quite excited about visiting the zoo. In my memories, the zoo was extremely large. I almost couldn't reach the end. But things have changed since I grew up; this time I felt it's not a big zoo at all. I even wondering wondered if this zoo was the same one I had visited before.
The zoo has many kinds of animals, some rare ones like alpacas, lesser pandas, seals, giraffes, raccoons, and llamas, and some more common animals like tigers, lions, wolves, monkeys and cranes.
I liked the llamas most. They were just so adorable! There were only two there, and I guess one was a boy and another was a girl. They were not like other animals, stand who stood far away from people, but walked close and looked at me. Very gentle eyes, just like water waving when they were blinked. They moved close, and would like wanted to eat everything! June's umbrella almost became their food.
And the giraffe. The tongue of it His tongue was soft, strong and flexible. It looked like eating when they were he was drinking. I really had no idea why they he needed to be that strenuous to drink drink that strenuously. After they drinked he drank, some water leaked from his mouth.
The poorest saddest animals was were the wolf wolves. They'd like wanted to drink but the basin was empty. They can could do nothing but to walk around the cage again and again. Juned said to me, "won't they felt feel even thirstier then than before? Walking will cost use up [or deplete] their energy and water too make them dehydrated." Maybe the wolf wolves didn't like humans, they couldn't speak, couldn't make people understand them. So they have too had to walk around to make people notice them. But it had was no use, no zoo keepers came.
I started to feel sorry about for the animals. If they were living in their hometown the wild, at least they could drink and walk and jump and go wherever they'd like to be. But now, they were in the a cage. No freedom, even not not even enough water. On the other hand, if there were is no zoos in the world, we couldn't wouldn't have a chance to stand so close to the rare animals. We will would have no chance to observe them. It's really a very complex thing issue and hard to tell whether have zoos are right or wrong.
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