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今天 today 今天我起床七点半。我每天学习中文一点半。后学习我吃早上,我吃水果,鸡蛋,和面包。后早上我出去上班。我是很忙。 前公司我来家和吃晚饭。

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今天 today

今天我七点半[1]起床七点半。

我每天学习中文一点半一个半小时[2]。

学习完后[3],我吃早饭,我吃水果、鸡蛋和面包。

(吃完)早饭后[4],我出去上班。我工作是很忙[5]。

下班之后我来回家和[6]吃晚饭。

 

[1] 'at 7' is an adjunct/adverbial. In this sentence, you should put 'at 7' between the subjuect '我/I' and the predicate '起床/got up' in Chinese.

[2] I know you want to say 'one and a half hour'. In Chinese, if you want to say a period of time, you say 一个小时/one(an) hour, 两个小时/two hours, 一个半小时/一小时三十分/one and a half hour etc. If you want to say a specific time, for example, you say 7 o'clock/七点, 7:30/七点半, 7:15/七点十五分/七点一刻 etc.

[3] ‘after learning/studying’ is a preposition phrase, showing after/before a specific time or act. We say '学习(完)后', '回家后', ... etc.

[4]'after (eating) breakfast', the problem is similar to [3].

[5] We often don't add '是' in this kind of sentence.

[6]‘和’ is nod needed here.

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今天 today

今天我七点半起床。我每天学习中文一个半小时(You mean one hour and a half, right?)。学习后,我吃早饭,我吃水果,鸡蛋,和面包。然后,我出去上班。我很忙。 前公司我来家和吃晚饭。The last sentence doesn't make sense. And I couldn't correct it, because I didn't get what you want to say. :)

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今天 today

今天我起床七点半起床。我每天学习中文直到一点半。学完,我吃早上,我吃水果,鸡蛋,和面包。然后早上我出去上班。我是很忙。 前公司我来家和下班后我回家吃晚饭。

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今天 today

今天我起床七点半今天我七点半起床。我每天学习中文一点半我每天学习一个半小时的中文。后学习我吃早上然后我吃早餐,我吃了水果,鸡蛋,和面包。后早上我出去上班然后我去上班。我是很忙我很忙。 前公司我来家和吃晚饭我下班后回家吃晚饭。
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今天 today

今天我七点半起床。我每天学习一点中文,然后吃早饭,今天吃了水果、鸡蛋和面包。吃完早饭,我出去上班。我很忙,下班后回家吃晚饭。

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