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My crazy and beautiful day.
Today was a crazy day. First I try tried to get up early and that is hard for me, but I did wo-hoo! Then I went to the hospital with my friend Andrea who is from Colombia and don't doesn't know many places in my country. After that we were went to eat and everything was fine until finished that she went home and I went to my work. When I was on my way to work is when I see realized that I don't didn't have cash money and I think thought "oh no! what can I do?" because I didn't have money for paid to pay for the public transportation. so I started to call to my friends, and thanks to God one of them answered and helped me... Okay I can breathe again, but not for many time long... When I try tried to get money in an automatic cashier, I can't is I think it was broken. and I think " Well it is time to pray to God, I need cash because tomorrow morning I will travel out on town early". Then I arrived to work but only for 30 minutes because I needed to go to my English class, and just got there when my partner arrived and started to talk with me. She talked a lot and I just only listened bla bla bla yakirisbakiri because I was just thinking "what can I do, I don't have time to go to a bank today and the others autautomatic cashiers are far away"... again I listened bla bla bla until she say said "hey take your money for the trip" (it is a work trip of work) and then she had all my attention jajajajaja... Seriously, I just can only say thanks God, you're so good.
Wow, that was a stressful day! But God is always there for us and He has made things work out in my life, just like He did for you in your day. Praise God! Why is waking up in the morning so hard?! What kind of work is your job? Have a great trip!
My crazy and beautiful day.
Today was a crazy day, first I tried to get up early, and that which is hard for me, but I did wo-hoo! Then I went to the hospital with my friend Andrea who is from Colombia and doesn´t know many places in my country. After that we were to eat ate and everything was fine until finished that she went home and I went to my work. When I was on my way to work (or just On my way to work), is when I realized that I didn´t have cash money and I thought "oh no! what can I do?" because I didn't have money for paid to pay for the public transportation. I started to call to called my friends, and thanks to God one of them answered and helped me... Okay I could breathe again, but not for long... When I tried to get money in from an automatic cashier, I couldn´t since it was broken (or just: I couldn't get money from an automatic cashier because it was broken) and I thought " well it is time to pray to God, I need cash because tomorrow morning I will travel out of town early"... then I arrived at work but only for 30 minutes because I needed to go to my English class, and just then my partner arrived and started to talk to me. She talked a lot and I just only listened bla bla bla yakirisbakiri because I just thought ¨what can I do?, I won't have time to go to the bank today and others autautomatic cashiers are far away...¨ again I listened bla bla bla until she said "hey take your money for the trip" (is a trip of work which is a business trip) and then she had all my attention jajajajaja... Seriously, I just only said "thanks God, you're so good."
Good job! Try to avoid run-on sentences and unnecessary words. Also, pay attention to the consistence of the verb tense (here, past tense) .Keep up the good work!:)
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