Better later than never.

Today someone told me the result of the Business English Certificate Examination (I took).

Today someone told me how the Business English Certificate Examination (I took) turned out.

After waiting for a long time (for an answer), I finally could know got the result (back).

I looked it up on the internet as soon as possible.

既然已經有人跟你說了結果, 那又要自己去查似乎多此一舉, 除非你的朋友只是跟你說「分數出來了」這件事情, 那前一段就應該說: Today, someone told me (that) I can look up the result for the Business English Certificate Examination/an exam I took earlier.

And it turned out that I didn't pass the exam, which made me feel very sad.

Having had a rest, I decided to contribute more time to studying English. The more time I spend (on it/english), the more I should improve can receive.

  or  I hope the more time I spend, the more I can improve.

沒有人可以這麼篤定的說只要花越多時間在學習上面效果就越好~ 所以我加了I hope, 在表現上顯得比較謙虛一點.

Better later than never.

:D GOOD LUCK!