Which world do you live in............!!?

Generally speaking, in order to control the (the sentence is grammatically correct, but I would probably say to control "your world" which is more relative and less sinister-sounding) world, you have to control the ideas that surround it. Therefore, Human beings live in three kinds of worlds; the first called "people's world"*, the second is "objects' world", and the third is nicknamed "thought's world". The ones who lives in the first, their life and beliefs are completely related to people (you mean that their life is cominated by people in general, not necessarily one person in particular), the second kind of people lives for an object--an emotionless thing. They are materialistic. The third kind of humans are the wise men. They are the people who always changing also are the ones and who make the world a better place through the creativity idea that they provide to the humanity.

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*It helps if you put the name of each world in quotation marks (" ") so it is clearer to read.

**I think there are probably a lot of different ways to say what you are trying to say here, but to say they "live in variety" in English is a bit awkward. I have given you just one of many other ways to say what you mean.

Interesting and well-constructed text. Though it may not look it, the corrections were only small things here and there and I added a few comments about them for clarity. :)

Which world do you live in............!!?

Generally speaking, in order to control the world, you have to control the ideas that surround it; therefore, human beings live in three kinds of worlds; the first is called the personals' world, the second is the objective's world, and the third is nicknamed the world of thought's world. The ones For those who lives in the first, their life and beliefs are completely related to a the person, the second kind of people lives for an object, emotionless thing, materialistic. The third kind of humans are the wise men, they are the people who always live in variety, and change, and also are the ones who make the world the best a better place through the creative ideas that they provide to the humanity.