Traveling to Paris
In the middle of July I have traveld to France with a good friend of main for 3 days trip.
First day we visited Disneyland, It was great, I enjped very much from the roller coasters, although that after few rides I felt a little sick, but it was worth it!
At the seocned day we travled to a very beautiful casstle near paris, the casstle built in the 16 century and was pretty enormous, next we went to the shanzelize and the gate of victory.
The Third day was the independent day of France, so saw the parade, which was pretty boring, some musems and Fireworks in Aifel tower, this part was the best part of the trip.
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Travelling to Paris
In the middle of July I travelled(you should use Past Simple,because you are telling about an exact trip happened in the past) to France with a good friend of mine for a 3-day trip.
First day we visited Disneyland.It was great, I enjoyed it much from the roller coasters, although after a few rides I felt a little sick, but it was worth it!
On the second day we travelled to a very beautiful castle near Paris.The castle was built in the 16 century and it was pretty enormous.After visiting the caster,we went to Champs-Elysées and the gate of victory.
The Third day was the independence day of France, so we saw the parade, which was pretty boring, some musems and Fireworks in The Eiffel tower and this was the best part of the trip.
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Traveling to Paris
In the middle of July I have traveled to France with a good friend of mine for a 3 days trip.
The first day we visited Disneyland, It was great, I enjoyed the roller coasters very much, although that after a few rides I felt a little sick, but it was worth it!
On the second day we traveled to a very beautiful castle near Paris, the castle was built in the 16th century and was pretty enormous, next we went to the shanzelize and the gate of victory.
The third day was the Independence Day in France, so we saw the parade, which was pretty boring, some musems and Fireworks in the Eiffel tower, this part was the best part of the trip.
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