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Drinking beer It is very hot and I felt very tired and bad this evering. Just then my phone rang that it was my friend Wens and he called me to drink beer. I said to him"Yes. It is a good idea". I have never drunk beer since last friday and I had to go to different place and meet different client for work every day. I felt very excited so that I hurried up to go to bar but i can't found Wens when I arrived at bar. I called him. the phone replied"You dialed is on the phone". So I recived a messeage from Wens and he said to me. he must go to hospital now because his girlfriends got a bad cold that she was in hospital. Although I was a little angry but he was right. I drunk tow bottles beer and intended to go home when I saw Lily who was my high-school classmate. I had neve seen him gratuated from high-school.she is more beautiful than she in high school. I called his name but she couldn't saw me because of A waiter between me and her. suddenly she saw me and called my name. Gary. you are Gary.she is exciting and crazy then everybody saw me. i felt happy and shy and we drunk beer for the whole evering. We made next appointment time when said goodbey ago.

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Drinking Beer

It is very hot and I felt very tired and bad this evening. Just then my phone rang, that it was my friend, Wens, asking me to meet him for a beer. and he called me to drink beer.
I said to him"Yes. It is a good idea". I haven't had a beer  never drunk beer since last Friday and I had to go to a different place and meet different clients for work every day. I felt very excited so that I hurried up to get  to the bar, but I couldn't find  can't found Wens when I arrived at bar.
I called him. The phone replied "You dialed is on the phone".?? So I received a messeage from Wens saying that and he said to me.
he must had to go to the hospital now because his girlfriends got a bad cold that she and was in hospital.
Although I was a little angry, but he was right. I drunk two bottles of beer and intended to go home, when I saw Lily who was my high-school classmate. I hadn't seen neve seen him her since we gratuated from high-school. She is more beautiful than she was in high school. I called his her name but she couldn't saw see me because of a waiter was between us me and her. Suddenly she saw me and called my name. Gary. you are Gary.  She was excited is exciting and crazy, then everybody was looking at saw me.
I was felt happy and shy and we drank beer for the whole evening. We made an arrangement to see each other again before we said good bye. next appointment time when said goodbey ago.

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