To vacation with your parents or with your friends?

Dear Robert,

Hi! How are you and your family? Say hello to them from me, please!

I received a letter yesterday in which you asked about having to choose between spending the holidays with family or with friends. Well, if I were you, I'd like to go on vacation with my parents.

It would be a great chance to be together as a family. You will have more time to chat with them and enjoy laughing, eating new food, and learning about a new country. I remember you told me your family was thinking about visiting India. I am sure that would be a nice experience! Besides, next year you will finish college and you might go abroad to work, which is popular among your generation. I suppose you will also be busier soon, so I recommend you go with your family. I also think you will have the rest of year to be with your friends. 

I hope to hear from you soon. 

Take care!

Vacation with your parents or friends? would you correct this for me, please?

Dear Robert,
Hi, How are you? and your family?, Say Hello to them from me, please.

I received a letter yesterday, in which you asked me about choosing your holiday between your family or friends. Why not? Well, if I were you, I'd like to go on vacation with my parents. It would be a great chance to be together, you will have more time to chat with them, enjoying, laughing, eating new food, and knowing a new country, because I remember you told me your family was thinking about visiting India, I am sure it will be a nice experience!. Besides of all, you will be being invited by them, and in addition next year you will finish the university. and Also maybe you will have to go abroad to work, like all our generation, so I guess you will be busier than now, so I'd prefer recommend you go to with your family. I also think you will have the rest of year to be with your friend.

I hope I hear from you.
Take care!

[Good job.  I say "your family WAS" rather than "your family WERE" because 'family' is singular, even though any family has more than one person.]