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Another day in Manchester I went to the park yesterday in the morning. I walked around all the park. I saw a chimpkunk. It was a cloudy day. There were a lot of children playing football, and some people walking with their dogs. There was wind. I saw a girl who fell down while she riding a bike. Fortunatly, she had helmet. I love the park, because i can do some sport, to walk, i can be quiet, listening to music,and breathing pure air. Last night, a friend ate in my house, and later we saw a film in the laptop. When we finished, he asked me if he could sleep at home. I said he could sleep in the sofa, but he prefered slept in my bed. I said he was crazy. Finally, he slept in my bed with me!

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Do they have chipmunks in Manchester, England ? - or is this another Manchester, one of the seven in different parts of the USA ?
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Another day in Manchester

I went to the park yesterday in the morning. I walked around all the park. I saw a chipmunk. It was a cloudy day. There were a lot of children playing football, and some people walking with their dogs.  It was windy.
I saw a girl who fell down while she was riding a bike. Fortunately, she was wearing a helmet. I love the park, because I can do some sport, walk, I can be quiet, listen to music,and breathe fresh  air.
Last night, a friend ate at my house, and later we saw a film on  the laptop. When we finished, he asked me if he could sleep at my place. I said he could sleep on the sofa, but he prefered  to sleep in my bed. I said he was crazy. Finally, he slept in my bed with me!

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