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If technology shifted to doctrine or self-objective,it would create conflict between technology and culture which would ultimately technology prevail. The alternative culture would be technology worship and all traditional culture life forms would be under the development of technology control. This culture has no moral compass causes disappearing some of human social and mental activities. The tools that produced by technology will think, provide easier and faster media, and contact with others instead of human.This culture sanctified data and information at the expense of ideas; experiment at the expense of thinking.
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If technology shifted to doctrine or self-objective, it would create conflict between technology and culture which would ultimately LEAD TO technology prevailING. The alternative culture would be technology worship and all traditional culturAL life forms would be under the development of technologICAL control. This culture has no moral compass WHICH WOULD cause some of human social and mental activities TO DISSAPPEAR. The tools that ARE produced by technology will think, provide easier and faster media, and MAKE contact with others instead of humanS. This culture OF sanctified data and information WILL COME at the expense of ideas; experiment at the expense of thinking.
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You didn't make any errors, just some words need to be added to make the sentence more natural. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me :)
P.s it's an interesting topic! what is it about?
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