Sunset

Awsome! I thought when I watched the sunset yesterday. After half past eight pm the blue was so bright that remind me of Dali's artwork. Some hints of white clouds adorned the scenery. I went out to admire it and a gentle breeze caressed my face. The sun was prepared to descend and fired its powerful rays like a torch.

(suggestion: 'As the sun prepared itself for descent, it fired it's powerful rays like a torch')

Blue was gradually changing in orange and pink to finish in a dark marvellous blue.

(Suggestion: 'The blue gradually blended with the orange and pink and culminated in a dark marvellous blue')

I added these suggestions as your writing is very beautiful and there are many ways of saying similar, or different degrees in English. I enjoyed reading your work, it is very poetic!

Sunset

Awesome! I thought when I watched the sunset yesterday. After half past eight pm the blue was so bright that it reminded me of Dali artwork. Some hints of white clouds adorned the scenery. I went out to admire it and a gentle breeze caressed my face. The sun was prepared to fall down and fired its powerful rays like a torch. Blue was gradually changing into orange and pink to finish in a dark marvellous blue.