my new life

So, I finished my studies at the college. College is secondary education in Russia. And Now I'm a student of the Conservatory in Yekaterinburg. I'm happy because it was my dream. I passed many exams and it was very difficult. My study will start in September, and I'll live in the dormitory. And I think that my new life starts. :)

Wow, you're English is nearly perfect! The only thing is that in written English, it is not good to use lots of short sentences together, but that is just a picky detail. Good work!

my new life

So, I finished my studies at the college. College is secondary education in Russia. And now I'm a student of the Conservatory in Yekaterinburg. I'm happy because it was my dream. I passed many exams and it was very difficult. My study will start in September. I'll live in the dormitory. And I think that my new life starts. :)

There are alternatives for the last sentence, Amelia.

I would have expected "I'll live in a dormitory and my new life will start" unless you intended to say that your new life starts now, before you go to the Conservatory.

Den

My new life

So, I finished my studies at the college. College is secondary education in Russia. And Now, I'm a student of the conservatory in Yekaterinburg. I'm happy because it was my dream. I passed many exams and it was very difficult. My studies will start in September. I'll live in the dormitory and I think that is when my new life starts. :)

 Congratulations! You already have a brilliant level of English, good luck! =)

* Try to avoid starting a sentence with "and"! ;-)