Have you ever felt like not going out?

I work in an office from Monday to Friday. I usually start working at 7:00 a.m. and finish at 6:00; then I go to the gym and arrive at my house at 9:00 p.m. On weekends, I visit my family and walk around the city; but yesterday I didn't want to go out! I just wanted to stay in my house and be quiet. Maybe sometimes it's necesary to take a rest.

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Nice job. A few explanations:

The use of ; is to avoid run-on sentences, or to show a break in the thought (for example, in the "On weekends" sentence). It also changes from present tense (visit) to past (didn't want).

"be quiet" works, but maybe a better way is to say "have some peace and quiet"

And yes, sometimes home is the best place to be! (Let me know if the exp.s are unclear.)