Big Sport for Young People

Sport has Sports have a long history. All the time people like to watch how professional sportsmen compete to with each other.

In our days, a lot of people do not want just watching for athletes, they are want becoming the athletes.

These days, a lot of people do not want to just watch athletes; they want to be athletes.

Today many do not want to watch athletes; they want to become athletes.

In this day and age, it is not enough to simply watch athletes; people want to become athletes.

That is why we have many young people in the gyms. There are several opinions about advantages and disadvantages of professional sport for young people.

Firstly, young boys and girls can make their own successful professional career in the big sport.

First, young boys and girls can become professional athletes on their own.  

Nowadays many parents give send their children to the specialized sport schools. They hope what that their children will be able to reach the top of a professional sport, and sometimes it happens.

Secondly, doing sport participating in a sport has a lot of positive effects on the athletes. They are look good and strong. It has the positive effect on the health and makes people more stronger to be able to resistant to illnesses. It also holds their minds in good conditions. Sports help maintain healthy minds. 

In contrast, professional sport can brings a lot of problems for health. For example, athletes can get the injures injuries and even would be die. History knows many cases when young sportsmen take the serious injury and they loose lose everything: job, fame, time. The big sport is too dangerous and do not give up the mistakes does not leave room for mistakes.

Furthermore, when young sportsmen trying try to reach the success, they would forget about other possibilities in life. They are becoming become more selfish and think about only their deals. They have to spend a big part of their life on nobody exept except themselves.

All things considered, I can concluded conclude that reaching the famous fame and success in professional sport does not to be the sense of the whole is not everything life for young people. Parents should give the choice to their children –to make a good decision by following their own feelings.

Great writing, Max! I feel that English articles and verbs are difficult for Russian speakers the way that Russian pronunciation is difficult for English speakers. As with any language, there are many different ways to communicate the same message. I hope my suggestions help!

I recently learned that there is no word in Russian for "workout." Russians use words like "practice" or "lesson" when speaking about athletic training. I think those words send a better message.

Have a good day!