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Hello. It's summer vacation!
I think I will go sightseeing visit old Japanese temples. A temple is a place for Buddhist worship.There is a very long history in Japan of temple of temples in Japan.
Thank you for reading!
(読んでくれてありがとうございます!)
-あなたの英語はいいです〜 :)
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Hello. It's summer vacation!
I think I will go sightseeing old Japanese temples (it will sound more natural if you add a time when you will go like today/tomorrow/next week at the end of the sentence). The temple is a place for Buddhist worship.There is a very long history in Japan of temple. Temples have a long history in Japan/ Temples have appeared in Japanese history for many years/ The practice of worshipping at temples has a long history in Japan.
Thank you for reading!
(読んでくれてありがとうございます!)
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