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heart is more important than brain this is a strange question . I always think of something interesting . I will describe my opinion about it . people have to finish a lot of work every day , and they have to think them over by brain . heart movement need to be balanced with brain , and the brain movement also needs to be balanced with heart , people often pay more attention on brain movement . I think both of them are " brain " , and both of them are important . heart is more important than brain . heart have to accepte the order of brain , it will seldom move naturally . it will be angry with you or tired of your brain orders . both of them effect each other . the engergy of heart can effect whole of body . and it will enlarge . maybe it will effect the whole world with heart energy and now we can't explain it in science . what shall we do to keep heart and brain in balance ? a simple way is to keep the brain empty for a few minutes in the morming , and make ourselves relaxed . thinking of nature , like mountains , rivers , green forest , so on . forgeting all the questions . heart need to be looked after warmly . it will come out large energy to help you to work hard by brain . we have two "brains " in body , heart is more important than brain. we should look after them and we will keep them in balance .

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The heart is more important than brain

This is a strange question. I always think of something interesting things. I will describe my opinion about it on subject.

As people have to finish a lot of working every day , and they have to focus on thinking  them things over by brain in their mind.  I believe heart movement needs to be balanced with the brain, as much as and the brain movement also needs to be balanced with heart.  People often pay more attention on brain movement.  I think both of them are "brains". , and  Although both of them are important, I feel the heart is more often important (neglected?) than the brain.
The heart has to accept the order of the brain.   It will seldom move naturally. It will be angry with you or tired of your brain orders. Both of them affect each other influence one another. The energy of the heart can affect whole of body and it will enlarge.
Maybe it will affect the whole world with heart energy. and Now we can't explain it in science .
What shall we do to keep heart and brain in balance ?
A simple way is to keep the brain empty for a few minutes in the morning, and make ourselves relaxed . It may help to think of nature; like mountains , rivers , green forest , and so on.  Forgetting all the questions.  The heart needs to be looked after warmly . it will come out Large energy to will come out  from it to help you to work hard for your brain .
We have two "brains " in the body.  Th heart is just as important as the  brain. We should look after them and we will strive to keep them in balance.

Comment:  Great topic!  I made some literary liberties to change meaning of several sentences to have thematic continuity.  Otherwise, the previous commenter is correct, it does sound contradictory.  Is the heart more important than the brain or is it more neglected??  I felt you meant neglected, but please change it, if otherwise. 

My 2 yuan: This essay seems to address the topic of mindfulness and meditation.  It is very applicable to current society, especially with the advent of technological connectivity and social media.  I feel its very easy to neglect one's own spirtual and mental health.  The lack of awareness  of "heart energy" and mindfulness could contribute to depression, fatigue and mental illness.


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I really appreciate what you has written in here and I would ratter prefer the idea of keeping the balance of brain end heart than being more important than other.
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The heart is more important than the brain

this is a strange question . I always think of something interesting (good English but this is giving yourself a complement which is a bit forward - you can say "I often think of unusual ideas").

I will describe my opinion about it .
people have to finish a lot of work every day , which and they have to think them over with the brain . heart movement needs to be balanced with the brain , and the brain movement also needs to be balanced with the heart , but people often pay more attention to on brain movement . I think both of them are " brain " , and both of them are important . heart is more important than brain . (this is opposite to the past sentence)

heart has to accepte the orders of the brain as it will seldom move naturally (or you can say "it will seldom move on its own accord").

it will be angry with you or tired of your brain's orders . both of them effect each other . the engergy of the heart can effect your whole of body . and it will enlarge .

maybe heart energy will effect the whole world with heart energy and now we can't explain it in science .
what shall we do to keep heart and brain in balance ?
a simple way is to keep the brain empty for a few minutes in the morming , and make ourselves relaxed . thinking of nature , like mountains , rivers , green forest , so on . forgeting all the questions . heart needs to be looked after warmly . it will come out large energy will come out to help you to work hard with the brain .
we have two "brains " in the body , heart is more important than brain. we should look after them and we will keep them in balance .

Very nice piece! Sums up meditation quite well. Thinking about thinking is also good!

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Keeping the brain empty is pretty hard :(

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