July 29th Wednesday Cloudy
Today is still hot and I have to visit one custmer of mine. He has a problem about my company's product, so I go there to solve it. I set out since I arrive my company, because I want to avoid the high temperature. However the temperature in the morning is not higher than noon. In this high temperature weather, if you go outside, you'd better to avoid the high temperature moment.
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July 29th Wednesday Cloudy
Today is still hot and I have to visit one custmer of mine. (good)
He has a problem about my company's product, so I go there to solve it. (not bad)
I set out the moment since I arrive at my company because I want to avoid the high temperature heat.
However, the temperature in the morning is not higher lower than that at noon.
In such a weather, if you go outside, you'd (you'd=you would; but your writing is in present tense) it will be better to avoid the heat at noon if you venture out high temperature moment.
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