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Crochet work
Hello, everyone! Today I’m going to talk about my handmade experience of handicrafts and I would like to begin with crochet.
I learned how to crochet when I was in summer camp in my childhood. There were a lot of hobby groups for children in their free time but all of them seemed extremely boring to me. Crochet seemed quite boring for me too but at least it can could [the rest of the sentence is in past tense, so changed "can" to "could"] be useful in real life, unlike “hand-made stuff out of natural materials”. So I chose a crochet hobby group and I didn’t regret it.
I was not good in at crochet then because it was my first experience, but I definitely got interested in it so I was practicing practiced all summer. Since then I’ve been doing crochet from time to time and I have become ame pretty skillful.
I think now I can make everything by could crochet anything now, even if I was standing on my head. Also I know that there are huge amount of amazing clothes that you can make by crochet and it which would be valuable because of its uniqueness, but it would requires time and a lot of patience from me to be honest.[You could say "to be honest" here, but it is not necessary. Or you could say "It would require a lot of time and patience from me which, to be honest, I don't really have right now."]
It’s a little dull to make the same pattern again and again for a person who likes more creative work, but at the same time it’s one of the most effective ways to distract your mind and calm down)),(so if you are looking for a way to relax I highly recommend crochet).
As for myself Personally, I prefer to make something nice and funny amusing ["funny" is acceptable, but I changed it to humorous, which is a bit more subtle. Funny suggests you would laugh at the designs. Humorous suggests more like they make you smile.] like doilies or other design elements to make give my house character funnier or to make a gift for my friends. [I changed 'funnier' again because I don't think you want to make people laugh. We use the expression "give something character" to mean we make it look unique, or to express some of our personality.]
For example recently I’ve made 7 butterflies of all colors to put on on my wall, and or this bright doily to put under my new cactus.
A few years ago I made for my best friend an amazing doily that looks like a lake with three-dimensional black and white swans on it. but uUnfortunately I didn’t make a picture of it andso I can’t show you that doily at the moment) but it looks really great.)
I’m going to make a shawl for my mom’s birthday soon. I’ll let you know about it if it's worth it. That’s all for now.))
Inspiration for everyone! <-[This is nice, but not really an English expression :-)]
["crochet" is a verb, so you can say "I crocheted some butterflies", or "I have seen people crochet clothes" not "I made some butterflies by crochet" or "I have seen people make clothes by crochet"]
I enjoyed reading your work. I completely understood what you had to say, and also I think your butterflies are very charming! Well done and good luck.
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