Green Mobile Phone - Text.
Hello,
Today i saw a report that presented a new release that will be soon on stores. It's a mobile phone made from organic materials. Will be the first device to be truly green; every internal component is made from a recycled item. Each phone is unique, totally stand out from the crowd!
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bye
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Green Mobile Phone - Text.
Hello,
Today I saw a report that described a new release that will be soon in stores. It's a mobile phone made from organic materials. It will be the first device to be truly green; every internal component is made from a recycled item. Each phone is unique, totally standing out from the crowd!
Thank you for correcting my short text,
Bye
[Good job. 'Presented' is correct, but you would see 'described' much more often.]
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