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Star Wars I'm a huge Star Wars fun and I try to follow all the news regarding the upcoming 7th part of this great saga. I remember that when I was a little kid I borrowed from a friend an old VHS tape with the first part of the original trilogy - which was in fact fourth episode of the whole story. I immediately fell in love with the universe created by Lucas and since then Star Wars has always been an important part of my life. When Lucas decided to film the second trilogy, which took place thirty years before the original one and showed us what exactly caused the fall of the Galactic Republic and what made Anakin Skywalker betray his friends and choose the path of evil, it was great, but we all, more or less, knew how would it end. Now it's different. Lucas sold the Star Wars franchise to Disney, and the latter decided that events from every book, video game or comic book, that took place after the sixth movie will be removed from canon. It was a huge decision, given that we have hundreds of books and comics that took the story up to one hundred years after the original trilogy. Thanks to that, the director and screenwriters of the new movie have the possibility of creating everything from scratch and to surprise us in a way Lucas couldn't have with the plot of the second trilogy. I'm really looking forward to see the movie and to find out if it's really gonna stand up to the expectations.

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Star Wars

I'm a huge Star Wars fan and I try to follow all the news regarding the upcoming 7th part of this great saga. I remember that when I was a little kid I borrowed from a friend an old VHS tape with the first part of the original trilogy - which was in fact fourth episode of the whole story. I immediately fell in love with the universe created by Lucas and since then Star Wars has always been an important part of my life. When Lucas decided to film the second trilogy, which took place thirty years before the original one and showed us what exactly caused the fall of the Galactic Republic and what made Anakin Skywalker betray his friends and choose the path of evil, it was great, but we all, more or less, knew how would it end. Now it's different. Lucas sold the Star Wars franchise to Disney, and the latter decided that events from every book, video game or comic book, that took place after the sixth movie will be removed from canon. It was a huge decision, given that we have hundreds of books and comics that took the story up to one hundred years after the original trilogy. Thanks to that, the director and screenwriters of the new movie have the possibility of creating everything from scratch and to surprise us in a way Lucas couldn't have with the plot of the second trilogy. I'm really looking forward to seeing the movie and to finding out if it's really gonna stand up to the expectations.

 

You write well Tomek - watch out for the use of "that".  It's commonly over used, even by many native english university students.  Definately and advanced tip though, let me know if you have questions.

 

 

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