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I'm feeling stressed. Sunday the 25th It's especially hot today! I work in a retail store for women. Many customers come to my shop every day. Some of many guests are big spenders! Sometimes I'm jealous of them. Now I can't buy new clothes, because I have to save money to go to working holiday. :( Ah... I'm dying to go shopping!!

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I'm Feeling Stressed.

Sunday the 25th
It's especially hot today!

I work in a ....retail store for women/ a women's retailers/a women's retail store. Many customers come to my shop every day. Some (of many guests) are big spenders! Sometimes, I'm jealous of them.
Now, I can't buy new clothes, because I have to save money to go on a (to) working holiday. :(
Ah... I'm dying to go shopping!!

 

Your English writing is very good.

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I'm feeling stressed.

Sunday the 25th
It's especially hot today!

I work in a retail store for women. Many customers come to my shop every day. Some of many guests are big spenders! Sometimes I'm jealous of them.
Now I can't buy new clothes, because I have to save money to go on vacation. :(
Ah... I'm dying to go shopping!!

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