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A New Android Game (please correct me) My friend showed me a new Android game today. Actually, the game also has a version for iOS and PC (which is played in a browser). It's a kind of quiz. The player chooses one of multiple topics and start a game. The system finds an opponent for the game from around the world. There are 7 rounds, 10 seconds each. You get a task in form of a question or a picture and have to choose between four answers. Games are quick and fun. You can play against players from any country and the continent of our planet. While playing you win different funny titles like "Brazilliant" or "Fantastic Mr. Fox". There is a ranking system too; each topic has its own ranking. It's so funny to see the starting screen saying something like "Player 1, 'Word Processor', The Best in July 2015, France VS Player 2, 'Britney Spears' Ex', In Top Ten July 2015, Indonesia. I should say it is hard for me to play topics where you get a text question, because I cannot read fast enough, but I like the picture questions very much.

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A New Android Game (please correct me)

My friend showed me a new Android game today. Actually, the game also has a version for iOS and PC (which is played in a browser). It's a kind of a quiz. The player chooses one of multiple topics and starts a game. The system finds an opponent for the game from around the world. There are 7 rounds, 10 seconds each. You get a task in the form of a question or a picture and have to choose between four answers.

Games are quick and fun. You can play against players from any country, on any and the continent on our planet. While playing, you win different funny titles like "Brazilliant" or "Fantastic Mr. Fox". There is a ranking system too; Each topic has its own ranking. It's so funny to see the starting screen saying something like "Player 1, 'Word Processor', The Best in July 2015, France VS Player 2, 'Britney Spears' Ex', In Top Ten July 2015, Indonesia.

I should say It is hard for me to play topics where you get a text question, because I cannot read fast enough, but I like the picture questions very much.

Notes:

1. The phrase is "kind of a" when talking about a specific thing. If you you're describing something, it would be "a kind of" ex: "It's a kind of candy."

2. You need "the" because it's a specifc thing "the form"

3.When making lists like that, it's easier to keep the start of them the same."and the" didn't make sense though. Also, you are on this planet. To say you are "of" it means you are from here.

4.A ";" is like a "." It ends a sentance, so the next sentance should start with a capital letter.

5. Everything highlighted in this didn't make enough sense for me to correct. I kind of got the idea though. It's probably all in the punctuation.

6. No need to say " I should say", just say it :)

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A New Android Game (please correct me)

My friend showed me a new Android game today. Actually, the game also has a version for iOS and PC (which is played in a browser). It's a kind of quiz. The player chooses one of multiple topics and starts a game. The system finds an opponent for the game from around the world. There are 7 rounds, 10 seconds each. You get a task in form of a question or a picture and have to choose between four answers.

Games are quick and fun. You can play against players from any country and the continent of our planet. While playing, you win different funny titles like "Brazilliant" or "Fantastic Mr. Fox". There is a ranking system too; each topic has its own ranking. It's so funny to see the starting screen saying something like "Player 1, 'Word Processor', The Best in July 2015, France VS Player 2, 'Britney Spears' Ex', In Top Ten July 2015, Indonesia.

I should say it is hard for me to play topics where you get a text question, because I cannot read fast enough, but I like the picture questions very much.

 

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