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Haiti the Paradise in summer I invite all of you to visit my country! Haiti is a very beautiful place, especially in summer! come to live the experience. i share a pic to show you what i mean, come to enjoy with us.

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Hassan's correction isn't quite right.. Try this:

 

"Haiti: the Paradise in summer

I invite all of you to visit my country! Haiti is a very beautiful place, especially in the summer! Come to live the experience. I'll share a pic* to show you what I mean. Come to enjoy with us.

 

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*Just a reminder that "a pic" is super casual and "picture" or "photo" are other less casual options.

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Haiti the Paradise in summer

I invite all of you to visit my country! Haiti is a very beautiful place, especially in summers! come to live the experience. i share a pic to show you what i mean, come to enjoy with us.

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