Could anybody correct it please? Thanks!

Report on shopping in Genoa.

Introduction

The aim of this report is to outline the most popular shops in my city and to point out why other shops should open.

Benefits

Genoa, being a city port, is situated in a good position beautiful location and tourists from everywhere all over the world are attracted by its sea and its history. Crossing the downtown area you can find many shops which sell the most popular fashion labels like Gucci, Prada, and so one. Many people, especially Russians, come here to buy those kinds of clothes.
In addition, if you have a smaller budget there are three shopping centers which allow people to catch things that are in discount during the whole year.

Disadvantages 

Genoa like Milan or Florence should focus on developing shops that increase tourism increasing shops in order to give more choices for those who like to shop for expensive goods.

Recommendations

I would recommend building up malls and bringing in the most popular brands into these shopping malls in order to avoiding the level of tourism declining,

Hi, I made some corrections. Hope they help. Regarding your topic - I know there is some controversy about building malls, as in some cases, building big shopping malls has a bad effect on small independent shops already in the area. But on the other hand how do people in the area survive otherwise? It is a hard situation. Hope you find a way!