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Environmental awareness Environmental awareness My friend Ana and I were in downtown. We were catching up because I don’t see often her as before when we studied on the University where I knew her. While we were talking, we saw in front of us that a woman with his son was walking. His son had a water bottle and he decided to throw it on the floor and his mother didn’t say anything. In this moment I asked me: What happen with some people? It isn’t the first time that I see that. My friend when saw that said me: His mom doesn’t know that it’s a problem because this is part of education. But this is the life that we choose and this is a problem because people need environmental education. Nowadays the mass media, schools, high school and universities are working to preserve the environment. It’s good because people will have environmental awareness and it’s necessary if we want live better and our children too. The social communicator and the educators together with the mass media and institutions can obtain a cultural change because through the communication we can change the world. It’s not late to preserve the environment.

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Environmental awareness


My friend Ana and I were in downtown. We were catching up because I don’t see her as often her as before when we studied on at the University where I knew met (OR got to know) her.

While we were talking, we saw a woman in front of us that a woman with her son, who was walking.  (OR 'we saw a woman in front of us, whose son was walking.')

 

Her son had a water bottle and he decided to throw it on the floor and his mother didn’t say anything.

In this moment I asked myself: What happen is wrong with some people? It wasn’t the first time that I saw that. My friend, when she saw it said to me: His mom doesn’t know that it’s a problem because this is part of education. But this is the life that we choose and this is a problem because people need environmental education.

Nowadays the mass media, schools, high school and universities are working to preserve the environment. It’s good because people will have environmental awareness and it’s necessary if we want live better and our children too. *better lives for ourselves and for our children. 

Social communication and the educators together with the mass media and institutions can obtain create/implement/effect a cultural change because through the communication we can change the world. It’s not too late to preserve the environment.

 

Possessive pronouns:

In English, the possessive pronoun related to the owner.

For this reason, we need to think carefully about his  and her.


For a woman:  HER son (because the son belongs to the woman)

                    HER daughter (because the daughter belongs to the woman).


For a man: HIS son (because the son belongs to the man)

                HIS daughter (because the daughter belongs to the man).


A good piece of writing!  Keep up the good work, Evelyn.

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