A short sentence
I hid behind some big sacks in the storehouse when I saw him threatening to kill her with a gun and after that he stormed out of the storehouse. It totally chilled me to the bone.
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A short sentence
I was hiding behind some big sacks in the storehouse when I saw him threatening to kill her with a gun. After that he stormed out of the storehouse. It totally chilled me to the bone.
*"storehouse" is a word we don't use much in American English. Is it a warehouse? A barn? An abandoned building?
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A short sentence
I hid behind some big sacks in the storehouse when I saw him threatening to kill her with a gun and after that he stormed out of the storehouse. It totally chilled me to the bone.
The first sentence is pretty long. Try something like this 'I hid behind some big sacks in the storehouse when I saw him threatening to kill her with a gun; after that he stormed out of the storehouse....It totally chilled me to the bone.' :). or even this 'I hid behind some big sacks in the storehouse when I saw him threatening to kill her with a gun. After that he stormed out of the storehouse. It totally chilled me to the bone.'
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