self introduction(informal)
My name is eden zhao, 21 years old, male, genimi. I'm currently studying information & code thoery in the telecommunication department of xidian university Xi'an. I am a curious person but lack of patience.
I like to swim and play ball games like tennis, badminton, table tennis. And after entering university, I'v watched a lot of jepenese animations, EVA, code geass and ef are my favorites. And I also love to watch american TV series and movies.(will it be a kind of detour for a self introduction if I continue to show which moive i like?) By watching whose animations and movies, I get interest in philosophy religions and those magic,legend stuffs.
in the old times, I loved to play games and played them all day long, but I have to quite now. I do not listen to much of music every day, but if I do, I prefer to listen some of england type of music like the carol of the bells and highwayman and some classic musics.
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Self Introduction (informal)
My name is Eden Zhao, a 21 year old male Gemini. I'm currently studying information & code* theory in the Telecoms Department of Xidian University, Xi'an. I am a curious person but lack patience.I like to swim and play ball games like tennis, badminton, table tennis. After entering university, I watched a lot of Japanese animations. EVA, code geass and ef are my favorites. And I also love to watch American TV series and movies. (will it be a kind of detour for a self introduction if I continue to show which movies I like?). Watching these animations and movies, I got interested in philosophy, religions and magical, legendary things of the olden times. I love to play games and play them all day long, but I have to quit now. I rarely listen to music, but if I do, I prefer traditional English music like the carols of the bells and highwayman and some classical music.
*coding theory?
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self introduction(informal)
My name is eden zhao, 21 years old, male, genimi. I'm currently studying information & code thoery in the telecommunication department of xidian university Xi'an. I am a curious person but lack of patience.I like to swim and play ball games like tennis, badminton, table tennis. And after entering university, I'v watched a lot of jepenese animations, EVA, code geass and ef are my favorites. And I also love to watch american TV series and movies.(will it be a kind of detour for a self introduction if I continue to show which moive i like?) By watching whose animations and movies, I get interest in philosophy religions and those magic,legend stuffs.
in the old times, I loved to play games and played them all day long, but I have to quite now. I do not listen to much of music every day, but if I do, I prefer to listen some of england type of music like the carol of the bells and highwayman and some classic musics.
My name is Eden
Zhao, 21 years old, male and Gemini. I'm currently studying
information & code theory in the telecommunication department of
Xidian University, Xi'an. I am a curious person but lack patience.
I
like to swim and play ball games like tennis, table tennis and also
badminton. After entering the university, I've watched a lot of
Japanese animations and EVA. Code Geass
and Elf are my favorites. And I also love to watch American TV series
and movies. (will it be a kind of detour for a self introduction if I
continue to tell which movies I like?) By watching those animations
and movies, I get interested in philosophy, religions and stuff about
magic and legends.
In the past, I loved to play games and I
played them all day long, but I have to quit now. I do not listen to
very much music during the day, but if I do, I prefer to listen to
some English music like “The Carol of the Bells”, “Highwayman”
and some classic music.
PS. I'm not into EVA so I'm not sure if that part is correct. It depends on what part of speech it is. Also, when I think of classic music, I think of Bach and Beethoven. If that is what you are thinking of, then 'classical music' would be better. Mike
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