20/07/2015

I got up at 5:43am and I (no need to repeat "I" as it is already understood) went to work. Work was flowing The day went by very fast/quickly and after work I went to the gym.
At 9:00pm I talked with Brett by Skype. It was my second lesson and we talked about the game "Go",  what I did on the weekends  and the news. I said told him that I don't watch much TV and I desire that I will hope to begin writing a diary in English every day. It was a very good session even though it was but only 30 minutes.

Well done Vadim!  Most of my corrections simply help to make your composition sound more natural.  When possible, it is a good idea to try and combine short sentences into one longer sentence.  This makes it more interesting for the reader.  Keep up your good work!

20/07/2015

I got up at 5.43am and I went to work. Work was flowing very fast. After work I went to the gym.
At 9.00pm I talked with Brett by Skype. It was the second lesson. We talked about a game called "Go", weekends, and the news. I said that I don't watch TV and I desire that I will  that I wanted to write diary entries in English every day. It was a very good session, but it was only 30 minutes.