Please correct these sentences

1. I recall Ann's squawk(,) and after that Ann fainted.
2. If I take his toy back(,) he will begin to whimper.
3. It was her curse to be alone (during all) (BETTER: THROUGOUT) her life.
4. Tom's feet were bare, so he could feel every roughness of the floor.
5. Ann rushed downstairs(,) clinging TO the handrail.
6. I saw the passage in the remote room.
7. I must warn you that he is too stubborn(,) and is not A decent man.
8. Did you hire her? No, I refused her because she is absent-minded(,) and she is distracted by everything.
9. Who ATA icicleS yesterday? So you had to endure your sore throat and DRINK a disgusting cure.
10. I wish YOU prosperity FOR your family. Don't pay attention TO temporary difficulties.

Please correct these sentences

1. I recall Ann's squawk before she fainted.
2. If I take his toy back he will whimper.
3. It was her curse to be alone all her life.
4. Tom's feet were bare, so he could feel the roughness of the floor.
5. Ann rushed downstairs clinging the handrail (bannister).
6. I saw the passage in the remote room.
7. I must warn you that he is too stubborn and not a decent man.
8. Did you hire her? No, I declined to hire her because she is absent-minded and distracted by everything.
9. Who ate an icicle yesterday? So you had to endure a sore throat and drinking disgusting medicine.
10. I wish prosperity on your family. Don't pay attention to temporary difficulties.

Please correct these sentences

1. I recall Ann's cry before she fainted"
2. He will cry and whine if I take his toy back.
3. It was her curse to be alone during all her life. <-- Good, or maybe "Loneliness was her life-long curse"
4. The floor was rough on Tom's bare feet.
5. Ann rushed downstairs clinging to the handrail.   
6. I saw the passage leading from the side room
7. I must warn you, he is stubborn; not a decent man. 
8. Did you hire her? No, I refused her, because she is absent-minded and she is distracted by everything.   <--- Perfect
9. Who did eat icicle yesterday? So you had to endure your sore throat and drinking a disgusting cure. <---  Unsure what is meant, is it maybe something like, "He who ate an icicle yesterday, will have to endure a sore throat and a disgusting medicine today".
10. I wish prosperity of your family. Don't pay attention on temporary difficulties.  <--- This is fine, I just removed the 'a' after 'wish'