a letter

Dear Vicky.

How are you? I am writing to tell you about my new school. To begin with, there are many stupid rules, such as: no speaking during the class without the permission of the teacher, dress formally, don't chew gum, and so on.

In my opinion these rules don't make any sense. I like to wear skirts and chew gum and I don't think that I bother anybody by doing so. I preferred my last school because they were not so strict.

See you soon.

Jessica

A letter

Dear Vicky, 

How are you? I am writing to tell you how is my new school is. To begin with, there are many stupid rules, as, don´t no speaking during the class without the permission of the teacher, dress formally, don´t no chewing gum and so on.

In my opinion, these rules don´t make any sense. I like wearing skirts and chewing gum and I think that I don´t me doing these will not bother to anybody doing that. I prefer my last previous school because it they were was not so strict.

See you soon.

Jessica

Well done, just a few minor errors! If you got any further queries, feel free to send me a message =)

a letter

Dear Vicky.

How are you? I am writing to tell you about my new school. To begin with, there are many stupid rules, such as don´t speak during the class without the permission of the teacher, dress formally, don't chew gum and so on.

In my opinion, these rules don't make any sense. I like to wear a skirt and chew gum and I think that I'm not bothering anybody doing these things. I prefer my last school because they were not so strict.

See you soon.

Jessica