Alex, You're an awesome teacher for me! Thanks!!!

Ah, nevermind, I guess there is no formatting in the comments. Sorry!

I wanted to write this separately as there are quite a few things to note. General notes: --Once you have established that you are talking about "REDDEN" you don't need to repeat it unless there is some place where you think someone might get confused about the subject. Otherwise, it is fine in places like the final statement. --Avoid using too many contractions (We're, we've, we'll, you're). It is fine for casual speech and conversation, not for professional documents. --Try not to separate all lines. Sentences on the same subject can stay in the same paragraph. --As this is an update note for a game, there are a lot of things you can shorten, since this information would be given alongside the rest of the game's information. I am unsure what you mean by "highlighting incompetency of people" so I did not replace it. Are you intending to say that you wish the game to still be hard so that it can be challenging ('hard') to play? A lot of things could be worded differently, so here is how I would write it: "We are preparing the first update for REDDEN! It has been a week since release. In that short time, thanks to your love and attention, we have received a lot of feedback. We have prepared an update reflecting that feedback. In this update: 1. The ability to change difficulty level. REDDEN was made to be a very hard game, but we think it is important that beginners to action games get to enjoy the story without the frustration. You can now select between Novice, Apprentice, and Expert mode. 2. The ability to switch between left or right-handed controls. We have taken into consideration the difficulty of seeing what is coming if your hand is covering the screen, whether you are right or left-handed. We will continue to fix bugs and improve the game. We will be posting the upcoming update list here soon! We really appreciate your feedback. Thanks for playing REDDEN!"