University Should Accept Equal Numbers of Male and Female Students in Every Subject

Throughout history whether females should study ing female students in for certain majors were was a crucial and controversial issue. On the other hand, Nowadays, some believe s that the number s of male and female students should be equal in all subjects. This state stance is refuted by looking at the ability of each gender and the situation of graduation in recent years.

Firstly, each gender has different capabilities, letting them to be able which enables them to do some work better than eachother. For example, men can suffer endure heavy and hard work conditions better than women, while by investigating females personalities we generally find they have significant ability to pay attention to details and manage problems. These capabilities can be seen in our society, where each gender is more successful in different majors. Thus, having the number of males and females equal ly in all subjects will not be efficient for society.

In addition to this, many people are graduated from university, but it is unemployment is a huge problem around the world and they could cannot find a desired job. Thus an employer has many choices to choose the best person for the vacant positions; therefore, they will pay more attention to the genders more than in past years. For instance, in my country the employers engage hire men as a civil engineers more often because they assert that men can better interact ion with laborers who are working under their hand. Such examples vividly illustrate how choosing a good major according of its to your gender can help people to you find a job in this economy disaster. Thus, subjects should be chosen by paying attention to the gender.

As above shows, that because of the different capabilities of each gender and also the situation of graduates in recent years, it is believed that universities should try to admit male and female students in different subjects in accordance with their capabilities and market needs. This trend will help students to be more successful in their careers after graduation.

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As above shows that because of the different ce capabilities of each gender and also the situation of graduates in recent years, it is believed that universities should try to admit male and female students in different subjects in accordance with their capabilities and market needed. This trend will help students to be more successful in their careers after graduations (if you start to write a sentence in plural, then you have to finish it with plural too) . 

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Universities Should Accept Equal Numbers of Male and Female Students in Every Subject

Throughout history, female students studying certain majors were a crucial and controversial issue. On the other hand, Nowadays, some believe that the number of males and females (or: male and female students) should be equal in all subjects. This [statement is supported](?) by looking at the abilities of each gender and the graduation situation in recent years.

Firstly, each gender has different capabilities, enabling (or: giving/allowing) them to be able to do some work better the other. For example, men can survive heavy and hard working conditions better than women. While by investigating female capabilities(?), they have a greater ability to pay attention to details and manage problems. These capabilities can be seen in our society, where each gender is more successful in different majors. Thus, males and females studying equally in all subjects will not be efficient for society.

In addition to this, many people have graduated from a university, but there is unemployment around the world and they may not find a desired job. The employer has many choices to choose the best person for the vacant positions; therefore, they will place more attention to the gender more than past years. For instance, in my country the employers hire men as a civil engineer because they assert that men can interact better with laborers who are working under them. Such examples vividly illustrate how choosing a good major according to gender can help people to find a job in this economic disaster. Thus, subjects should be chosen by paying attention to the gender.

As Above shows that the different capabilities of each gender and also the situation of graduates in recent years, it is believed that universities should try to admit male and female students in different subjects in accordance with their capabilities and market needed. This trend will help students to be more successful in their career after graduation.

General notes:

--Lots of instances of improper tense form. If the subject you are referring to is general, without directly talking about one particular type or category, it is infinitive and usually ends with an 's'. You just have to make sure and identify the core subject of the sentence you have written.

---Example: "University Should Accept..." Because you are not talking about a single, named University (such as University of [name/place]) or a category of universities (such as [Country's] University System) it would be a plural in reference to any/all.

---Example: "...the numbers of male and female..." You are talking about males and females ('men and women' is more suitable). Unless you are referring to a male or female [something], [something] would be plural instead.

---Example: "...vividly illustrate how choose a good major..." You are talking about 'any/all' majors and choose is the verb, so 'choosing' would be the infinitive.

--When using 'situation' as the subject, you put the type of situation first (license situation, economic situation, employment situation), unless you are connecting it with another verb (situation involving licenses, situation with the economy, situation in your job).

--"On the other hand" isn't required because you have not established a disparity or disagreement that early in your notebook entry. Nowadays is a statement involving location/place/time, so using it in the beginning of a sentence requires a comma. It can not directly connect to the words after it. Use it the same way you would use 'Today' or anything else involving a location/place/time.

--I am unsure of what you are intending to say with "This state is refuted..." 'Refuted' is a statement expressing a negative (against the stated topic). Did you happen to mean 'statement' or something involving a 'a current state' (example: The state of our past/current/future society)?

--"...letting them to be able to do..." While letting does sound like it would make sense here, you are referencing a difference in capabilities that would otherwise allow/afford/give an advantage (ora particular [something]). 'Let' implies there is something being held back or previously forced.

--'Suffer' implies that is what is currently occurring. 'Survive' (overcoming some sort of suffering) is more along the lines of what it sounds like you were implying.