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July15 Hi Today i went to the bitch together and I swam in the Mediterranean Sea. I met with my friend Kendra. She told me She had boyfriend and I was shock. At afternoon I went to the shopping center and I bought a lot of clothes. Tomorrow I will go with my mum and my aunt to the center to buy and i spend day with them. Bye friends!

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July15

Hi
Today I went to the bitch beach ("bitch" is a swear word, ha ha) together (with a friend?) and I swam in the Mediterranean Sea.
I met with my friend Kendra. She told me she had a boyfriend and I was shocked.
At In the afternoon, I went to the shopping center and I bought a lot of clothes.
Tomorrow I will go with my mum and my aunt to the center to buy shop (you "buy" a specific thing, but you "shop" as a general activity) and i spend day with them.
Bye friends!

 

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July15

Hi
Today I went to the bitch beach together (faltó decir junto con quien) and I swam in the Mediterranean Sea.
I met with my friend Kendra. She told me she had boyfriend and I was shocked.
At afternoon I went to the shopping center and I bought a lot of clothes.
Tomorrow I will go with my mum and my aunt to the center downtown area for shopping and i spend the day with them.
Bye friends!

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