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I'm Not a Bear (retelling) Old Mr.Black loved shooting bears. But his eyes were not good. His friends feared when Mr.Black shooted with them. Becouse he could injure somebody. Once day a young man wated to have a joke. He wrote on a piece of paper very big letters "I'M NOT A BEAR" and tied it to back. But Mr.Black shot at him. The young man was very angry and said: "Didn't you see this inscription?" Then Mr.Black went to him and said:"I'm very sorry. I didn't see the word NOT!"

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Old Mr. Black loved shooting bears. But his eyes were not good. His friends feared when Mr.Black shot with them/went shooting with them. Because he could injure somebody.
One day,/Once, a young man wanted to have a joke. He wrote on a piece of paper in very big letters "I'M NOT A BEAR" and tied it to his back.* В более естественно порядке слов: He wrote "I'M NOT A BEAR" in very big letters on a piece of paper and tied it to his back.


But Mr. Black shot at him. The young man was very angry and said: "Didn't you see this inscription/sign?" Then Mr. Black went to him and said: "I'm very sorry. I didn't see the word NOT!"

Интересно! Вы знаете, "Кто-нбдь went to him/her and said..." окажется действительно обычным нелитературным словосочетанием, на некоторых британских формах разговорной речи!

 

Все этого напомнит мне только о Дике Чейни. Хаха

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