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Please correct spelling and garmmartical errors and unnatural expressions in the short letter Dear Sam, I am writing this letter to inform you that I need to withdraw from your evening Chinese language course. As I told you on the first day of the course earlier this month, I am working full time and it seems that I have reached a point where I cannot juggle between work and study. Yesterday at work, I was given a warning from my boss that if I continue to show unprofessional behaviours such as sleeping and not listening to the boss during a staff meeting, I would be fired. He also said that I would be undertaking a project, which is of high importance. As a result, I need to withdraw from your course and concentrate on work for a few months. Once I finish the project and become capable of juggling work and study, I will re-take your course. I apologise for any inconvenience my withdrawal might cause. Thank you for your assistance. Best wishes, Yeong

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Please correct spelling and garmmartical errors and unnatural expressions in the short letter

Dear Sam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I need to withdraw from your evening Chinese language course.

As I told you on the first day of the course earlier this month, I am working full time and it seems that I have reached a point where I cannot juggle work and study. Yesterday at work, I was given a warning from my boss that if I continue to show unprofessional behaviours such as sleeping and not listening to the boss during a staff meeting, I would be fired. He also said that I would be undertaking a project, which is of high importance.

As a result, I need to withdraw from your course and concentrate on work for a few months. Once I finish the project and become capable of juggling work and study, I will re-take your course. I apologise for any inconvenience my withdrawal might cause.

Thank you for your assistance.

Best wishes,
Yeong

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Nicely written. If I were being pedantic, I'd suggest that 'unprofessional behaviour" and try not to repeat the 'juggle life and work' phrase. Perhaps, you should drink more coffee? ;)
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Thanks! Were there any spelling or grammar errors in the letter? I live in Australia
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Very well-written! Some of the spellings ("behaviours" , "apologise") are British-preferred spellings. Not sure where you live.

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