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People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people attend college or university because they want to get high salary job after they graduate. But that is not the only reason. 2 of the most important reasons why people choose to go to college are to learn more about a specific subject that they interested in, and to experience the college life.
First of all, the most important reason to attend college is to gain high quality employment. There are more opportunities of high quality employment between people who graduated college than there are for people who have not. Most companies prioritize people who graduated college over people who have not when looking for employees. Therefore, it has a major impact on people.
Next, learning more about a specific subject that they interested in is also important. To begin with, colleges and universities are places for the study of specific things, and helps broaden people's knowledge.
In my opinion,  experiencing the college life is one of the best reasons to go to college. This is because college students are already adults so they are able to do anything that they want. They can also meet good friends in a college or maybe they can even can find a partner. In addition, Many people who live with their parents, can also get a sense of freedom by living by themselves.
In conclusion, there are a lot of reasons why people attend college. Them most common reasons are to gain high quality employment, to learn more about a specific subject that they are interested in, and to experience college life.

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Please correct my writing entry.

People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people attend college or university because they want to get a high salary job after graduation/ graduating. But not only for this reason: there are 2 other reasons why they study at college. 2 of the most important things are learning more/ the specific subjects that they are interested in and to experience college life.

First of all, the most important reason to attend collage is to gain high quality employment. There is huge different number of get opportunity of high quality employment between people who graduated college and people who not graduated collage. A huge amount of graduates obtain high quality employment as compared to non-graduates. Most of companies give priority to people who have graduated from college than over those who have not. not graduated collage when they employ. And it is one of the big turning point that affect after long time. (??)

Next, learning more specific subject that they/you are interested in is also an important reason to study at college. To begin with, college or university is a place that where they/you can study about specific things, and broaden their/your knowledge.

In my opinion, to experience college life is the most attractive thing reason to go to college. College students are already adults so they can do anything that they want to do. Also they can/ also meet good friends in a college or maybe they can find a partner. In addition, many people are want to live without their parents and They can also get free by living by themselves.

There are a lot of reasons why people attend to college; most important reasons among which are those three that to of gaining high quality employment, learning more specific subjects that they are interested in, and to experience college life.

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Please correct my writing entry ><

People attend collage or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people attend college or university because they want to get a high salary job after graduating. In addition to this reason, there are 2 other reasons why they study at college. 2 of most important things are learning a more specific subject that they interested in and to experience college life.
First of all, the most important reason to attend college is to gain high quality employment. There is huge difference number of get in opportunity for high quality employment between people who graduated college and people who have not graduated collage. Most of companies when they employ give priority to people who have graduated college than those who have not graduated collage when they employ. It is one of the big turning point that continues to have an affect over a long time.
Next, learning a more specific subject that they interested in is also an important reason. To begin with college or university is a place that studies about specific things, and broaden their knowledge.
In my opinion, to experience college life is most attractive reason to go to collage. College students are already adults so they can do anything that they want to do. Also, they can meet good friends in a college or it may be they can find a partner. In addition, many people are living away from their parents, they can also feel more free by living by themselves.
There are a lot of reasons why people attend to college, but most important reasons are these three that to gain high quality employment, learning a more specific subject that they interested in, and to experience college life.

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[Good work.  'Collage' is a piece of art made by sticking many different pictures onto a back.]

Please correct my writing entry ><

People attend collage or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Many people attend collage or university because they want a to get high salary  paying job after they graduate. But not only for the  this reason, there are 2 other reasons why they study at college. 2 of the most important things are learning more about a specific subject that they interested in, and to experience collage life.
First of all, the most important reason to attend collage is to gain high quality employment. There is are  a huge different number of get opportunity of high quality employment number of high quailty emploment oppertunities, between  for people who graduated college, and for people who did not graduate collage. Most of companys give priority to people who graduated collage, rather than not graduated collage when they employ  Those who did not graduate, when they employ. And It is one of the big turning points that affects you for long time.
Next, learning about more specific subject that they interested in is also an important reason. To begin with, collage or university is a place that  to study about specific things, and broaden their knowledge.
In my opinion, to experiencing collage life is the most attractive thing  reason to go to collage. collage students are already adults, so they can do anything that they want to do. Also they can meet good friends in a collage or maybe they can find a partner. In addition, Many people are live Live without their parents, They can also get free by live by themselves (i dont understand what you are trying to say)
There are a lot of reasons why people attend to collage, the most important reasons are those three. to gain high quality employment, learning about more specific subject that they are interested in, and to experience collage life.

Thank you for checking :)