l can speak a little English
Dear Tom，
I am wu xie.Ysteday,we has make an outh ceremony for us 18 bithday. I am very happy because my teacher send some postcard for me.After students prepare a program,it was very fan.Finaly, I went express thankgivling for my parents and teachers.Ther were often offer suggestion when I have trouble or questions.Also, I think friends was important in my life.l can study with my friends.
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l can speak some English
Dear Tom，
I am Wu Xie. Yesterday, we have make an outh (?) ceremony for our 18th birthday. I am very happy because my teacher sent some postcard for me. After the students had prepared a program, it was a lot of fun. Finally, I went to express my thanks to my parents and teachers. They often offer me suggestions when I have trouble or questions. Also, I think friends are important in my life. l can study with my friends.
可能这是不是oath ceremony?
您是18年de生日吗？生日快乐！
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l can speak a little English
Dear Tom，
I am Wu Xie. Yesterday,we has make had an oath ceremony for us our 18th birthday. I am was very happy because my teacher sent some me a postcard for . After, the students prepared a program. It was very fun. Finally, I want to express thankgivling my gratitude for my parents and teachers. They were often offer suggestions when I have trouble or questions. Also, I think friends was are important in my life.l can study with my friends.
often offer suggestions sounds a little awkward ("off...off" sound)
you could say: "they often help me"
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