My sister funny experience
One day, we are going to playgound, a little boy want to touch my sister, My sister said," you can't come here. with three times. the last time my sister hite the boy and crying, my mother is lauthing. So this is a funny experience.
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I hope you don't mind but I took the liberty to change a little of the wording a bit to make the flow more interesting.
Also, here is a link to the word admonition http://www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/admonish
My sister's funny experience
One day, we went to the playgound and a little boy wanted to touch my sister. Three times my sister said, "You can't come here". After the the third admonition, she hit the boy and he cried. My mother laughed. This was a funny experience.
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My Sister's funny experience
One day, we were going to playgound, A little boy wanted to touch my sister. My sister said," Three times that,You can't come here. The last time my sister hit the boy and cried.My mother was laughing. So, it was a funny experience of my sister!!
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