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Presenation Good morning, I'm Federico. I'm twenty seven years old. I'm from Rimini, Italy. I work like a financial broker from Monday to Friday and in week end I dedicate myself to my hobby, like painting or make sport. My dream is live in America, in October of the past year, I was in Texas for fourteen day. I remaining very enchanted by this land, so now I want to live in it. My family is divorced, and I live in my mother's house. My father is a sculptor of international fame. He work on marble, wax, stone and bronze. My mother is my trainer. She is a financial broker, an she have been teach everything she know about financial trading to me in this last years. I'mean in search of new friend that can teach me about new languages. I hope this can be a good beginning for me. Thanks for your time.

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Good morning, I'm Federico. I'm twenty seven years old. I'm from Rimini, Italy. I work as like a financial broker from Monday to Friday and in at weekends I dedicate myself to my hobbies, like painting or doing make sport.
My dream is to live in America, in October last of the past year, I was in Texas for fourteen days. I remaining am very enchanted by this country land, so now I want to live  there. in it.
My family is parents are divorced, and I live in my mother's house.
My father is a sculptor of international fame. He works with on marble, wax, stone and bronze.
My mother is my trainer. She is a financial broker, and she has taught me have been teach everything she knows about financial trading over the years. to me in this last years.
I'm mean in search of new friends that can teach me about new languages.

I hope this can be a good beginning for me. Thanks for your time.

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Good morning, I'm Federico. I'm twenty seven years old and I'm from Rimini, Italy. I work like as a financial broker from Monday to Friday and in on the weekend I dedicate myself to my hobbies, like such as painting and make playing sport. 

My dream is to live in America. In October of the past last year I was in Texas for fourteen days. I have remained very enchanted by this land and so now I want to live in it there.
My family is divorced and I live in my mother's house.
My father is a sculptor of international fame. He works on marble, wax, stone and bronze.
My mother is my trainer. She is a financial broker, and in the last year has been teaching me everything she knows about financial trading to me in this last years.
I'm in search of new friends that can teach me about new languages.

I hope this can be a good beginning for me. Thanks for your time.

 

Molto brava! :) 

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Ciao, Frederico. In English we use the word "Introduction" (not "Presentation") in this context.

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