7/13/2015
Fireflies River Cruises
As the boat was sailing further and further into forest, it left behind all the houses which adorned with little lamps along the banks, entering into the inner part of the river which flanked by the mangrove forest. The darkness set in and the sky changed its color from deep orange into inky black. We started to see the trees lit up with some flickering lights. Slowly, as the boat was ferrying us further in, hundreds of sparkles started to appear. Hundreds of fireflies lighted up and decorated the mangrove trees; it was like a stunning nature’s display of Christmas light, blinking on and off against the black background and the silhouette of the trees.
It was such a breathtaking view!
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7/13/2015
Fireflies River Cruises
As the boat was sailing further and further into forest, it left behind all the houses which were adorned with little lamps along the banks. It entered into the inner part of the river which was flanked by the mangrove forest. The darkness set in and the sky changed its color from deep orange into inky black. We started to see the trees lit/light up with some flickering lights. Slowly, as the boat was ferrying us further in, hundreds of sparkles started to appear. Hundreds of fireflies lit up and decorated the mangrove trees; it was like nature’s stunning display of Christmas light, blinking on and off against the black background and the silhouette of the trees.
It was such a breathtaking view!
Note: excellent writing! I've moved a couple of words around which help it flow a little better :) great work Misa!
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