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My home town My home town is very far from my home, It is in cheng dou. In there, all the people are eating spice food. but, I don't like to eat it. But,my sister like to eat it. And my mom likes too. So this is my home town.

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My Home Town

My home town is very far from where I am living now. my home, It is in Cheng Dou. In there, all the people Everyone there eats are eating spicy food, but, I don't like to eat it. But,My sister likes to eat it, and my mom likes too. So this is my home town.

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My hometown

My hometown is very far away from my home, It is in Cheng Dou.  There all the people  eat spicy food.  I don't like to eat this type of food. But,my sister and mom like to eat this type of food. So, It was  all about my  hometown.

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My hometown

My hometown is very far from my home, which is in Cheng Dou. In There, all the people are eat spicy food. but I don't like to eat it, but my sister likes to eat it. And My mom likes too. To me, this is my hometown.

 

My hometown

My hometown is very far from my home, which is in Cheng Dou. There, all the people eat spicy food. I don't like to eat it, but my sister and mom like to eat it. So, to me, this is my hometown.

 

Try to avoid starting sentences with words like "but" and "and" - it is grammatically incorrect. Good luck to you!

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My home town

My home town is very far from my home - it is in Cheng Dou. There, all the people eat spicey food but, I don't like to eat it. However, my sister likes to eat it, and my mom likes too. So this is my home town.

 

(I changed a couple of words - it's better not to begin sentences with 'and') :D

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