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Please correct my diary entry >< I think today was not bad day because I could wake up earlier and mom made great breakfast that not usually happen. And I had 2 other good things in a day. One is found my earring that I was looking for long time when I cleaning up my room. The earring was a birthday gift from best friend so I was glad and jumped when I found it. the other one is finally I bought some little cactuses for decorate the room. I hope tmrw will also great day... Thank you for checking ^^

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Please correct my diary entry ><

I think today was not a  bad day because I could wake woke up earlier and mom made great a breakfast. This that not doesn't usually happen. And I had 2 other good things happened today in a day. One is I found my earring that I had been was looking for for a long time. I found it when I was cleaning up my room. The earring was a birthday gift from my best friend so I was glad and jumped when I found it. The other one thing is I finally I bought some little cactuses for to decorate the room. I hope tomorrow  tmrw will also be a great day...

Thank you for checking. ^^

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Please correct my diary entry ><

I think today was not a bad day (suggestion: "was a good day") because I could wake up earlier early (suggestion: "was able to wake up early" or simply "woke up early") and mom made a great breakfast, and that does not usually happen. And Also I had 2 other good things in a day happen today. One is I found my earring that I was looking for for a long time (suggestion: this is okay when speaking, but probably better is "that I had lost for a long time" so that there isn't "for for"). I found it when I was cleaning up my room. The earring was a birthday gift from my best friend, so I was glad and jumped up when I found it. The other one is I finally I bought some little cactuses for to decorate the room. I hope tmrw will also be a great day...

Thank you for checking ^^

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