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Please correct my diary entry ><
I think today was not a bad day because I could wake woke up earlier and mom made great a breakfast. This that not doesn't usually happen. And I had 2 other good things happened today in a day. One is I found my earring that I had been was looking for for a long time. I found it when I was cleaning up my room. The earring was a birthday gift from my best friend so I was glad and jumped when I found it. The other one thing is I finally I bought some little cactuses for to decorate the room. I hope tomorrow tmrw will also be a great day...
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Please correct my diary entry ><
I think today was not a bad day (suggestion: "was a good day") because I could wake up earlier early (suggestion: "was able to wake up early" or simply "woke up early") and mom made a great breakfast, and that does not usually happen. And Also I had 2 other good things in a day happen today. One is I found my earring that I was looking for for a long time (suggestion: this is okay when speaking, but probably better is "that I had lost for a long time" so that there isn't "for for"). I found it when I was cleaning up my room. The earring was a birthday gift from my best friend, so I was glad and jumped up when I found it. The other one is I finally I bought some little cactuses for to decorate the room. I hope tmrw will also be a great day...
Thank you for checking ^^
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