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Hello, my name is Fara and I'm from Indonesia. I am 16 years old.

I have a book called "when I look fail". [I'm not sure what this book is called].

I have entered a competition for exchange students. I hope I win. If I win, I will study abroad in the  USA for 1 year.

In my mind I don't believe I  can do it as I know my English is not good but it's not good to give up so I am trying. When I enter it, if I'm the winner, I will be so surprised and will be just speechless.

i just can't say "i give up" but my english not good and I just think I'm a stupid girl but i got it!! I'm a "WINNER"!!! I am very happy and I'm so lucky. Thanks to God for giving me a chance. My parents are so proud.

But my story is not yet over.

I had a test and I failed. It's made me very stressed and I have been crying everyday.

i just can say "i give up" but now I will stand tall and I will improve my english and I will learn everything I need to become an international diplomat ONE DAY ;)

[Very well done but some things to work on. I must be in capitals as in 'I' not 'i'. Lots of dots like......are ok for texting (SMS) but not when writing in English. Look at tenses and practice your present and past tenses. eg. I am an exchange student. I was an exchange student before I was a diplomat.

Good luck!]