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Two effects from the increases of foreign tourists in Japan

The increase of foreign tourists in Japan has had 2 effects on Japan. The first result of this increase of foreign was that the responses is a burden to us. In particular I mean, it shows a need for Japan to improve information available in foreign languages, especially in Chinese, Korean, and English are needed.

I will talk about my experience. When I worked in the game booth of a large household retailer, one Chinese woman visited us and asked me about game consoles. But I couldn't understand her because I can’t understand Chinese.

Nowadays, the Japanese government concentrates on English education. However I think Chinese education is just as necessary as English since the majority of the tourists are Chinese and many of them can’t speak English. Moreover, there are quite a few Japanese people who are not sufficiently proficient in English.

The second effect of this increase is on tourism revenue. There is a rumor that Japan as a tourist destinations has gained popularity by attracting many returning tourists. Of course, those people are increased. Chinese tourists have become particularly important for the Japanese tourism industry. In places like Hong Kong, the tourism industry account for about 10% of GDP. In Japan’s, it is just 0.5%. This number shows us that there is room for further improvement. In conclusion, the increase of foreign tourists in Japan has had both negative and positive effects.