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About He. He born in a small house in the country. His parents was very poor and they built their house with gifted materials by their best friends. One bedroom and one kitchen for five family's members and two dogs, a pitiful condition. He was the latest child in the family. He walked when he was six months and pronounced his first words at his seven months, his first words were "milk mom, milk please". Those words would be his mockery forever. When he was one year, his father found a snake together with him. He -his father- was scared and ran toward his son. However, the snake ran first and disappeared in the fodder. His childhood was difficult, his parents always had problems to earn money and provide him food. However, he and his siblings every time had food but his parents did not have it. In that moment, he never knew about hunger and poverty. His parents told to him that a great future was waiting for him and it was true. He was lucky because he born in a country where the education was free. Also, his elementary school was among best instructions in his country. His first time in the school was difficult but not for him, it was difficult for his parents. They cried every day and were worried respect to his latest son. To continue...... Saludos desde México.

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About Him.

He born in a small house in the country. His parents were very poor and they built their house with gifted materials from  their best friends. One bedroom and one kitchen for five family's members and two dogs, a pitiful condition. He was the latest youngest  child in the family.

He walked when he was six months old and pronounced his first words at his seven months, his first words were "milk mom, milk please". Those words would be his mockery forever-He would be mocked for those words forever. When he was one year old, his father found a snake together with near him. He -His father- was scared and ran toward his son. However, the snake ran first slithered away-escaped and disappeared in the fodder.

His childhood was difficult, his parents always had problems  earning money and providing him with food. However, he and his siblings every time had food but his parents did not have it. However, he and his siblings would always have food even if it meant his parents going without. In that moment, he never knew about hunger and poverty. His parents told to him that a great future was waiting for him and it was true.

He was lucky because he born in a country where the education was free. Also, his elementary school was among the best instructions in his country. His first day at  school was difficult,  but,  not for him, it was difficult for his parents. They cried every day and were worried respect to his for their youngest  son.


To continue......

Saludos desde México.

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About Him.

He was born in a small house in the country. His parents were very poor and they built their house with gifted materials from their best friends (or "with materials gifted by their best friends"). One bedroom and one kitchen for five familys members and two dogs, a pitiful condition. He was the last child in the family.

He walked when he was six months and pronounced his first words at his seven months, his first words were "milk mom, milk please". Those words would mock him forever. When he was one year old, his father found a snake together with him. He -his father- was scared and ran toward his son. However, the snake slithered away first and disappeared into the hay/grass.

His childhood was difficult, his parents always had problems earning money and providing him food (or "providing food for him"). However, he and his siblings always had food but his parents did not have it. At that time, he never knew about hunger and poverty. His parents told to him that a great future was waiting for him and it was true.

He was lucky because he was born in a country where the education was free. Also, his elementary school teachers were among the best instructions in his country. His first day at the school was difficult, but not for him, it was difficult for his parents. They cried every day and were worried with respect to their youngest son.


To continue......

Saludos desde México.

 

Very good! Some corrections were just to make it a little more natural. :-)

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