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Does luck have anything to do with success or the only way to success is hard working? Success is defined as act of happiness. Success depends upon person’s goals; it can be different from person to person. For example some people feel that they succeed in life if they have money. Some people feel that if they pass the exam they will succeed etc. It’s totally depending upon person goals. For this specific essay let me choose success as a person have everything in life like money, quality education, happily married etc. In one hand, Luck of course matter. For example, a person who born in rich family. I think he/she start his life more comfortably and more chances he can avail all other things which lead him to succeed. For Example he will study in good schools to get quality education which leads him to get quality job but it is not always necessary to get education from quality institute leads him to be succeeded. He may be not study well there and it will lead him to failure. In other hands, hard work is more important to be succeed in life because hardworking is a skill which lead him/her towards success. He/she always do hardworking to be succeeding in life no matter he is lucky or not. In conclusion, I can say hardworking is more important thing to be succeeds in life. I cannot ignore luck at all because it matter somehow like some people born intelligent and some got gifted qualities but still I believe a hardworking person can achieve all. Some improving tips are also appreciable.Thanks

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Does luck have anything to do with success or is the only way to success through is hard working?

Success is defined as an act of happiness. Success depends upon a person’s goals; it can be different from person to person. For example some people feel that they succeed in life if they have money. Some people feel that if they pass the exam they will succeed etc. It’s totally depending dependent upon a person's goals.
For this specific essay let me define choose success as a person that has have everything in life like money, a quality education, and who is happily married etc.
InOn one hand, Luck of course matters. For example, a person who born in rich family. I think he/she start their his life lives more comfortably and with more chances he can achieve avail all other things which will lead him to succeed. For Example he may will study in good schools to get a quality education which leads him to get a quality job, but it is not always necesarily necessary to get an education from a quality institute leads one him to be succeeded. He may be not study well there and it will lead him to failure.
In other On another hands, hard work is more important for to be succeed sucess in life because hardworking working hard is a skill which may lead him/her towards success. He/she can always do use hardworking hard work to be succeeding in life no matter whether he is lucky or not.
In conclusion, I can say thar hardworking hard work is the most more important thing to be succeeds succesful in life. I cannot ignore luck at all because it matters somehow like how some people are born intelligent and some have got gifted qualities but still I believe a hardworking person can achieve all.

Some tips for improving tips are also appreciable appreciated.Thanks

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Does luck have anything to do with success or is the only way to success is hard working hard / hard work?

Success is defined as the act of happiness. Success depends upon a person’s goals; it can be different from person to person. For example, some people feel that they have succeeded in life if they have money. Some people feel that if they pass the exam, they will succeed, etc. It’s totally dependent upon personal goals.
For this specific essay, let me choose success as a person having everything in life, like money, quality education, a happy marriage, etc.
In one hand, luck matters, of course. For example, a person who is born in a rich family. I think he/she starts his/her life more comfortably and has more chances so he can avail all other things which lead him to succeed. For example, he will study in good schools to get a quality/good education which leads him to get a quality/good job, but it is not always necessary true that to get an education from a quality institute leads him to be succeeded. He may be not study well there and it will lead him to failure.
In other hands words,  hard work is more important to be succeed in life because working hardworking is a skill which lead him/her towards success. He/she who is always working hardworking will to be succeeding in life no matter if he is lucky or not.
In conclusion, I can say that to be hardworking is the more important thing to be successful in life. I cannot ignore luck at all altogether because it matters somehow, like some people are born intelligent and some got gifted qualities but still I believe a hardworking person can achieve all.

Some improving tips are also appreciated. Thanks.

 

Good text! I agree that hard work is more important than luck, if only because you have control over that part of life. You can choose to work hard, but you can't choose to be lucky. 

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