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Diary 7.3 Today is Friday.My final exam is getting closer . I have studied all day . I feel a little tired . But there is still a happy thing , my summer holiday is coming ~hahaha I want to go travel alone . But my father thinks it's too dangerous for a girl to travel .I still want to say that I have already been adult for 1 year . Rencently in Weibo Chinese people are concered about one news about one Korea mom and her two kids . I can't express this news clearly in English .If you want to know this news , you can search it in Internet , maybe you can get some information about it . And I just hope they can be helped . Yesterday I post a short writing in English. I feel very different ~ Thanks again to someone who corrects my words~

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Diary 7.3

Today is Friday, my final exam is getting closer and I have studied all day . I feel a little tired, but there is still something good happening , my summer holiday is coming! ~hahaha
I want to go travel alone, but my father thinks it's too dangerous for a girl to travel alone. I still want to say that I have been adult for one year already.
Rencently in Weibo Chinese people are concered because of this story on the news about one Korea mom and her two kids . I can't express this news clearly in English .If you want to know more about this news , you can search it in Internet , maybe you can get some information about it .  I just hope they can be helped .
Yesterday I posted a short writing in English. I feel very different ~
Thanks again to someone who corrects my words~

 

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fight fight, you can test. :)

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